Daily Feedback Thread (May 08, 2024)

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conqueringlionkappa

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Hey lads, i recently released a track which has been sitting on the shelve for a good month. After hearing it again i decide not to hoard the wav like i usually do and just release it..

Let me know what you think of it & what needs improvement? Cheers

Link: https://youtu.be/YlYzp2ZKL0o

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conqueringlionkappa

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Oh good one hehe 😅 here it is https://youtu.be/YlYzp2ZKL0o

thelittlepotcompany

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Just getting back into music making...

Listen to The Sound Of The War by Tom Humphries on #SoundCloud https://on.soundcloud.com/CRVQg

Quirky-Cancel3100

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Hi! Looking for feedback on this idea i have, especially the mix, which im unsure about. The chorus feels a little to "much" in terms of different sounds at once. Needing other opionions on it. Thanks!

https://voca.ro/144PTuFgjXrn

omhoog_music

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Wow, this sounds perfect to me. Very full and clean mix, solid sub bass. At no point did it feel 'too much at once' to me. Love this!

NorthBallistics

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https://soundcloud.com/nbc9/grampsrapids-wip?si=f47882cb1528421a896d9837f5a1586b&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

Here it is, quite the hyped up breaks tune, brings me back to my roots ... I'd love to find someone to finish this tune with.

burneracc826484

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Hi, this one's really experimental with a lot of granular stuff going on. I would appreciate some feedback, esp. on mixing or if you have other ideas for the track :)

https://soundcloud.com/ext_src/parallax

ActSpecialist8049

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https://on.soundcloud.com/mkh6Nj4kH5HKjnBG8

Something I did while being sick. All feedback is welcome :)

hellboi182

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This is really good! Just the vocals are sounding too loud on my speakers and I only have them at 50% volume. (for the first 2-3 mins) but the vocals blend in well torwards the end. Overall I really liked it! BANGER!

NorthBallistics

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i feel like it could be cleaned up, the transition sound that's stereo back and forth needs to come down. the vocals do sit a little funny almost like they're sitting on top of the tune. that "talk to me vocal" isn't the same singer is it? why did it not have the same effect? seemed out of place.

man a lot of good producers out here... this vocal reminds me of the late 1990s in some shitty theatre rave. i don't mean that in a negative way, but more theatre raves were shitty lol. ;) I'm old.

dommiedj

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Looking for feedback on a melodic house track I’m finishing up, particularly the second verse onwards, I’m very happy with it so far :) https://drive.google.com/file/d/1jZOFVDCNoMboEt9CBI0SVwxyoBeioCnr/view?usp=drivesdk

NorthBallistics

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the beat is way in the back, i'd love to hear some more compression and bring it way up. overall pretty groovy track. :) the mix needs some work in my opinion, but you're almost there. i like my stuff loud, it's a taste. :)

Dyeeguy

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https://voca.ro/1an0bzYXyHMc

Not EDM but would appreciate any feedback on this short experimental vibe… still gotta figure out the end. My brother jams on the guitar a bit

NorthBallistics

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I'd like a quad please. this makes my brain hurt a little, but i feel like that's exactly what you're going for. this is psychosis in a song.

External_East_7381

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WIP mixed and not mastered. Would love any feedback, criticism, advice. I also feel (as someone above said) that the sound could be more dynamic..so maybe too much compression. I plan to shorten it slightly by cutting a couple bars at the breakdowns.

https://soundcloud.com/iomit/alligators-of-new-orleans-mixed/s-xJ6Z58DGDlP?si=bb53675edcdd4d2195fc4d7ac22b8a55&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

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hellboi182

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This is my first full track. I usually give up but I actually finished this one. Any feedback would be appreciated. https://soundcloud.com/alterboy-861937641/its-just-edm-tho?si=1696a6503ead4635a5521d53873dc8f4&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

briannyaga5555

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Another one of my old tracks, I'm looking for someone to collab to remake this song. Anyone who wants to help me reach out. https://youtu.be/WOx8CjHU2E8

mrheydu

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Hey guys, just keep coming back to this mix but I'm at a point I am not sure if I am making better or worse. Looking for some feedback. I will try to listen to everyone's track today once I am done with work . Thanks in advance https://on.soundcloud.com/79BEtAyHoEbcwuuk8

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