good news, i went back to the drawing board and made something better, it should be posted by now
thank you for the feedback, i have taken advice and made a revised version of this video from scratch. i just posted the more polished tape.
well my general idea is that there is some sort of siren in the forest luring and merging with its victims
just try, i am tweaking my first project right now to make it better. i would suggest laying out a plot and storyboarding how each part goes and then work it out from there
i just posted a version of it that is a bit easier to comprehend. regardless thanks for the feedback, ill try to tone the next one down and probably make it a bit less rough audio wise
is it just me or does your dad not look exactly like Kurtis Conner
My parents (and a baby me) Christmas 1988. They were 18 when I was born, and have been happily married for 36 years.
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