It would be cool if someone would make either the armor or both horse and armor. That's all lol.
I'm fine with it. I do get annoyed that people make such a big deal about names in general. I'm not the best at remembering them, and I don't care if someone remembers mine or not. I don't have the ego to think it's really mine when millions of others share it.
Are you happy is my go to
Everything ends. If you take care of yourself you'll probably last longer than most, but death can come at random. Better to accept the possibility everyday then to tell yourself it won't come to you early.
How many lives must I end for your forgiveness?
where does it say that 86% lol
can also just talk to them manually and give them the position. Not for gov I don't think but for party roles.
I know this post is 2 years old, but i tried it anyway
using hair mod and detailed character creation
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I feel ya. Having a dog and treating them really well helps tbh.
I'll throw around some quick thoughts as someone that looks decent so what I say might not matter. Also I don't really date, but women tend to like me.
Do you want to be with someone for your looks? Focus on trying to look decent: wear flattering clothes, shower, get a haircut that looks good with your face, etc. Try to get to a healthy looking weight, or somewhere close. There are plenty of attractive looking women with less attractiveness and vice versa.
Find things you like about yourself that you find attractive: your want to learn, empathy, being good with dogs/children, intelligence, what you're passionate about, and find ways to talk about these things in a non-show-off-y way.
Be kind and polite, but not nice. Niceness feels fake, being a gentleman feels fake. Be real, but find ways to make your real self pleasant to be around. If you can't find anything, find places you genuinely want to improve, and do so.
There's 7 billion people in this world, so it's numerically likely there's someone out there for you. You don't have to stop looking, but try just being more active around so you naturally see more people in areas you enjoy being at.
15% bf is like top 10% at least, if not lower. It seems I get more looks now that I'm still muscular, but added on line 50 lbs.
Alright that's all I got, sorry it's long.
Autism has advantages and disadvantages. The world is becoming more optimal for the majority, leaving smaller groups behind.
Being hypersensitive to sounds can keep you alive. Having a sense for bad tasting things is good when things are poisonous.
Having focused interests can advance our people in that focus faster.
This isn't to undermine anyone. It is still a disability. But there's reasons a lot of things that don't affect everyone are still around.
"everyone's a little dumb sometimes, but believing that makes you dumb as shit at all times."
I would say something more like
"They may disassemble your heart But I'll be here to put it together."
Don't think you want to be the one doing that idk.
Probably put "a poet" instead of "the poet"
Might also want to try:
"To be what took time, took thought to create, every ounce of meaning soaked into the reader." Or something like that.
I think you could make it longer. Talk about ways poems could show your reality in a better light.
Yeah it's a bit intentional, this one is more an introduction to what I'm working on currently, so it's meant to kinda introduce a few things I want to talk about. Thanks for commenting!
on the 4th line. can remove "I" and "all" if you wanna make it 3-3-3-3.
at the end, maybe for my brother's love.
Looking good :)
I'm learning that now that I posted my own stuff lol, super annoying.
Cut out every part
that you dont like.
I'd do anything
to be perfect tonight.
Cut off my hair
and swap my clothes.
Change my laugh;
rip out my throat.
Change every part
and i wont fight.
I'll do everything
to be who you like.
Nothing left;
cut up to pieces.
Gave up everything;
my only weakness.
Floating aimlessly;
no body of my own.
Every part cut up
and left all alone.
Nothing left;
cut up to pieces.
Gave up everything;
my only weakness.
Floating aimlessly;
no body of my own.
Every part cut up
and left all alone.
I go a bit more based on feel with semicolons, but that's how i think i would set it up
Feels good. just some word suggestions:
second line: being changes to is.
"You're the main character, but only the author gets praise."
"Should they cry or laugh at me?
"I have a bookmark that's never moved. You gave up on me so you could 'improve'."
"My life's stranger than fiction. But I'm the typewriter, I don't need permission."
Looking good, some wording change suggestions:
No one talks about grieving someone who's still alive
remove "who" from second line
"who's" on third line
instead of "you yourself" just "you're"
I'm afraid my wasted love will never go away
I'm afraid I've no love left for someone else
because it was all taken by you.
Flows pretty well. simple rhyme scheme. there are some words that can be removed to make flow a bit cleaner I think.
They know you can but you won't
Don't let this substance cause strife
I'm sorry it's all you've known
Your children have seen too much
they miss their mothers touch
Idk just small things
Flows pretty well. simple rhyme scheme. there are some words that can be removed to make flow a bit cleaner I think.
They know you can but you won't
Don't let this substance cause strife
I'm sorry it's all you've known
Your children have seen too much
they miss their mothers touch
Idk just small things
yeah, I like rhyming and rhythm a lot, both are really fun, and can help me from just rambling lol.
Thank you! I'm going to try posting more.
curiously, when I critique, should I try to help with rhyming and rhythm, or talk more about the theme and things like that?
I'm still learning how to use reddit to edit lol. This comment came out looking real poorly. It's your work, I like it either way. I focus a lot on the flow and sound of poems. If there's anything specific about it you'd like me to critique or look at, let me know :)
All this back and forth lol. Do you have a chance? yes. Is it high? no, not at all.
Do I even have a chance?
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