Flush the idea out more. You definitely need an intro and a bit more structure. But you’re on your way.
What kind of structure suggestions do you recommend?
You have an A part verse. B part chorus and a C part interlude (kind of thing.) but the C part never shows up again in the song but is pretty early in the song. Just think of structuring a little be more in being a bit more repetitive.
nah man
I disagree. I can hear what he's going for and this is perfect as is. Trying to force a different structure over this song would kill it. Infact it's current structure makes me want to listen to this on repeat lol.
Damn bro, this is great. Reminds me of the Smashing Pumpkins. like you could literally use 1979 as a reference if you wanted to produce it fully with more instruments, but even acoustic like this is nice. Legit makes me feel nostalgic man.
Keep strumming I would sit and listen