What do you like and or dislike about this?

Hard to see anything not to like, as if every stroke was intentional. To me everything looks great, but I am no expert in classic composition. I especially liked how you pulled the camera back to show that it's in a sketchbook, journal, diary etc.

Certain details seem to be more interesting to you than others, like color for the hair thingy (don't know what girls call that).

The face is excellent. The rest of the character lacks details and form, except the back of the left hand, which have too much detail.

Aim for a balance.

Great piece of art, I really enjoyed.

This is all worth what you paid for it. That’s my way of saying any criticisms should be taken lightly.

Face is great, arms and hands reminded me on an older woman for some reason, maybe I associate with the sinewy look. Hair on the sides could have maybe a little more attention to detail with more line work?

She reminds me of a character from a horror manga "Spiral: uzumaki" by Juuji Ito.

Like the pencil sketch , hate the chicken scratch on the left side of her face .

The face is perfect but needs much detailing over all

I thought of Alice from wonderland

Overall I really like it but I can't help the feeling that her arms are too skinny as some of the lines make them look like they're nothing but skin and bones.

I like all of it ,keep going:3🖤✨

I don't like that it's colored in a little bit it looks incomplete. Other than that its amazing!

The bangs are so detailed ,and then there's the rest of the hair.

The art overall is really good, especially the face. I just think the back part of the hair (I’m so sorry if that’s confusing..) could use a little more detail, as well as the left hand. >_< I’m not an expert when it comes to art tho, but that’s just rlly what I think x3

This is brilliant!! I love the little patterns you did on the right cheek and chin, as I’ve never seen anything alike before and it’d really defines your art as yours if you’re consistent with that stylistic choice. I also love the hatching you’ve done under the eyes, though that’s more of a personal preference I would imagine. It just looks really nice, and defines it. Adds more to look at, more interest.

The thing that is bugging me though, is that of course you’ve added a lot of texture to show that the bangs are quite thin and there’s a lot of individual little locks of hair, though behind the head band, there’s none of that. It seems a little incomplete like that, and if I were drawing this piece, I’d add a little of that gradient to the behind of the hair. Just to sort of add consistency.

Other than that though, I absolutely adore this, and I love your style!!

Needs some shadows and shading, I like the colors on the face

It's Soo cool but it's like the blue and pink marker on her cheeks ruinned a bit but this is art anyways sooo don't mind bad comments and don't get some bad vibes Take care

Bi sexual :)

I like the shape a lot but I can tell you’re afraid of color. I’d play with blocking in values with your pencil and shading before commuting to color!

I really like how the face is laying in the hands and the little uplift it gets, I don’t particularly enjoy the colours at this stage, if you plan on adding something more…

I really love the line work and the headband color but I don’t like the tattoo? On her face

I love the unique fluffy eyebrows

The bruising is laying on top of her face but not actually apart of her face/under her skin

Personally I think the perfectly vertical hatching is a little distracting but that's just my subjective take.

I like it a lot. I don't like that it's not entirely colored, honestly. My likes are facial structure, really well composed.

I think it looks fantastic! The lines are crisp and I like the selective color marks, are they bruises? Scratches?

Could the pencil lines use a final pass? An opportunity to refine? Perhaps another pass on a lightbox in pencil, perhaps you could ink the lineart (either in analog media or digital)?

What do you want to communicate? That might be a place to start...

The hair in the back looks kinda of odd.

I love everything except the colors. Try shading in next time . But it’s beautiful OP

Might want to put more detail on the right hand and the rest of the hair, and also some shading and it would look nice👍

I literally love everything and there’s nothing to dislike

The Artist is noob. Look at this sketch not those f**king dots. He is making You fool😁😁😁😁

I hate everything about it