Looks great and super yummy. I tell people, don’t point out your mistake(s). Most of us would never noticed what flaw you see. No need to call attention. Of course, posting here is for feedback so okay to point out what you know. Any place else, most everyone would see this as a beautiful, yummy masterpiece.
I usually cut it down the sides, and then into strips, and then in half. If that makes sense. This one, my sister in law cut a super thin slice like you would a normal cake because it has a raspberry filling in it.
I would write down how you got the extra thick drip, it may not be ideal for this cake but for some it could be amazing in terms of decorating! Imagine a more cartoon style cake, this would be fantastic!
This looks great! Sometimes a thick fudgy drip like this is perfect for the cake. Yum!